Rate my poem please??????

the poem is called "Beautiful"





A flower blooms at midnights stroke, like a star as it shines Bright, the white of its color portrays an inoccent purety.


They call it beautiful.


A flower blooms at the dawn of morning, its blazing color like a sunrise, portrays the promise of friendship.


They call it beautiful.


A flower blooms during midafternoon, blood-red in color it absorbs the sunlight, while portraying symbols of love.


They call it beautiful.


When flowers bloom in a medow afar, and no one can see the color they are, maybe the moon smiles, or maybe the sun shines.


You might ask their names and I would tell you,


They call them Beautiful.








Please tell me what you think you have my permission to give your oppinion and please be honest.

Rate my poem please??????
That is very nice!..."Beautiful" as a matter of fact! Keep up the great work!
Reply:pretty good ..i like how you repeated "they call it beautiful"
Reply:I like it because it is very good but I think you can kind of make it an improvment by instead of saying they're beautiful you should call them love and friendship ect. ect. ect. so you should call them all beautiful. Just a idea. Nice poem though.
Reply:a little listy, but its pretty good.


it loses its poem form as you go on.


but overall, like i said it pretty good.
Reply:I really like the last part ("When flowers bloom in a meadow afar" etc.). I somewhat miss the rhythm this has in the other parts.





Apart from that, I really like it. It's cute and poetic!
Reply:Its really good, I would give it an 8, but you should check your grammar...
Reply:8
Reply:It's Beautiful :D
Reply:I really liked it! It made me think of happy things, spring, beauty (obviously). Its a very euphoric feeling, very vividry. Nice job.
Reply:I loved it, I think you have a lot of talent, please check for spelling, before you have this published.
Reply:Its so sweet and absolutley gorgeous


I wish i could write like that. ur awesome!
Reply:Flowers are boring.


If they represented something else then it would be more interesting.
Reply:thats really really good, one improvement is maybe instead of they call them......... change the beautiful to different words each time
Reply:I would rate a fair 6 out of 10
Reply:Hey! wow i can honestly say that ur poem is amazing!!! i aspecially like the line 'they call them beautiful'! Keep up the good work! xxxx
Reply:its a good start, but


1 -flowers dont really shine


2 - i would say "the white of its color portraying innocent purity."


3 -take out the during between blooms and midafternoon


4 - take out the while between sunlight and symbols


5 - *meadow


6 - its pretty good, but not especially deep. but pretty and good imagery, add more things like the blood-red color, or blazing color, etc
Reply:I really like your poem, I call it beautiful!
Reply:wow. dammn girl u got talent lol. im gonna give u my honest opnion. thats was oretty amazing. u shud submit it on some places and make some more. talent like this comes naturally and can take you pretty far in life lol. well keep making more there good.