Saturday, November 14, 2009

My new short poem, The Moon?

Opinions?





The Moon.





Luminous moon


Enlighten the night


Twinkling stars


Glowing with light


Behind is the sun


Keeping it bright


Shine in darkness


It blazes alight

My new short poem, The Moon?
The moon- a favorite subject of mine , and you have written a very lovely poem about it. I love the form and rhyme, and it all flows well. You have said so much without a word wasted. Thank you.
Reply:I really liked the descriptiveness of this, I usually don't enjoy short-lined poems like this, but, this one I really loved! Its really rythmatic and moves along very well, bravo!

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