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Flying





If you could fly, and soar in the sky, you’d fly for days ceaseless.


You could fly whenever and wherever you like without any stress.


You could fly within the dim clouds and the blazing sun,


Soar above the clouds, touch the stars, you’d be the only one.


No words could describe it, but it would be nothing but fun.


If you could fly.





You wouldn’t even have to touch the ground,


Because you’d have the entire universe to explore around.


Alone and independent, sailing through the sky


You wouldn’t know the feeling, unless you gave it a try.


Exuberance would fill you pretty fast, even in the blink of an eye.


If you could fly.





You could glide upon the stars and skies,


.0Even watch the vivid sunrise.


You could be the first to feel the chill of rain,


No worries, no fear, only freedom from the strain.


Imagine floating upon a downy cloud’s terrain.


If you could fly.

Rate My Poem Please? 1-10+ [10+ best]?
I give it a 10, I liked it....and it makes me wish I could fly...Nice poem thanks for sharing. :)
Reply:Wow that was the best poem i have heard of.


How long did it take to make it i wish i could write really good poems just like you.





Thank You For Sharing your poem 1000000+
Reply:10..


It was very good and had a "dreamy" feeling to it.
Reply:Poems are not just rhymes - which this is- it uses god rhymes but lacks poetic language. It appears as if the need to rhyme has become the overriding principle. 5/10
Reply:try getting rid of words that are not needed.


example.


You wouldn’t even have to touch the ground,


try getting rid of even.


and here,


Exuberance would fill you pretty fast, even in the blink of an eye.


try saying something like


Exuberance would fill you quickly, in the blick on an eye.





that is if you want to keep that sentance, it could be changed completely but it makes it sound better.


good luck.


otherwise it was good.
Reply:i gave that 100/10 that is a very lovely piece of poetry there!





I'm 12 and i write poems. And that my friend has inspired me to keep writing.





Could i have you consent to put this on my site? if i could i'll need your name and age!





Thank you!
Reply:I give it a 10, the poem is very good.
Reply:really good and totally makes u think....this is my PERSONAL opinoin since i dont really like that type of poem but urs was really good so i give it a 9!
Reply:I thnk this is a very good poem. I like how it ryhmed and you used a lot of detail. I'll give you a 10.





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have a good day or night
Reply:i give it 100000000000000 Stars!!


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