Ladies, is this a suitable v. day poem?

I gaze in awe and breathless wonder,


This sky of stars our lives live under.


Beneath this canopy of shining jewels,


We play around and act like fools.


A silver stream eternal changing,


Starlit moon, so close comes ranging.





A blaze of fire across the sky,


And in my heart I wonder, why


As constellations spin and dance,


My eyes are held with gaze in trance.


But not upon those heavens yonder,


But on you ,


I gaze in awe and breathless wonder.








or should i write some thing else

Ladies, is this a suitable v. day poem?
That is the most beautiful poem I have read in a long time. Use it and you will surely make her yours completely. =)
Reply:Thanks, and it's her loss.,,,,.;-), one day I'm sure you will find the girl that fits that poem perfectly. Report It

Reply:Amazing!
Reply:love it. congrats, you should be a poet.
Reply:That's wonderful! Anyone would be happy to recive that! 10/10
Reply:That' amazing! If you actually wrote that it's very good! =)
Reply:Beautiful
Reply:It's very sweet. Really, use it. : )
Reply:Did you write that or steal it from someone else?
Reply:WOW!! That is awesome!
Reply:SPIKE?????? Is that you???
Reply:wow...it's awesome...trust me...I hate mushy stuff...but that's good.
Reply:aaah sweet - but is it yours Cyrano?