Charlotte.......?

Charlotte, oh charlotte


I hear the wind whisper your name


All the heartache I went through


A time when all our dreams would come true


A time when all we had was innocents


You are safe now on the other side


I told you I would hold on I would be strong


Well that was the first time I lied


The time is right my stars are aligned


Not thinking of all the things I will leave behind


Feeling the rope around my neck


I can since you are near


But the whispers of your name is all I hear


For some reason I stop


I see the blazing fire


I see your smile as it takes me higher


I remember when you got sick


My depression that I could not kick


The thing that I really miss


Would be your sweet kiss


I will go on alone


This much I know


Ever since you left long ago


Charlotte, oh charlotte

Charlotte.......?
AAAAhhhhHHH , what can i say, i felt the feeling you want to show.. it's really great, i felt the feeling i felt your dark world, i felt when she went to the safe side and you alone in this lonesome burning hell in you.. the rope is getting tighter and tighter.. cause no one or nothing can loose it for you..


dear Black knight though its a fiction but the writers feelings allways shows.. you are allways tied down by your feeling.. lingered by your pain.. TBK my friend i know you hate to be told this but.. you have to start moving on.. as days goes by your body gets older but your soul is there.. bull it out..


but one line in the whole poem is what i hated.. "I told you I would hold on I would be strong


Well that was the first time I lied " to me whateva happened you've been strong till the end now that charlotte is gone you kept your promise..
Reply:This is a very nice poem to your friend Charlotte .This such a wonderful Ode to a true and loving girlfriend and she would love it so.
Reply:that is a very nice poem you wrote for your friend ,take care and enjoy your day