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The Moon.
Luminous moon
Enlighten the night
Twinkling stars
Glowing with light
Behind is the sun
Keeping it bright
Shine in darkness
It blazes alight
My new short poem, The Moon?
The moon- a favorite subject of mine , and you have written a very lovely poem about it. I love the form and rhyme, and it all flows well. You have said so much without a word wasted. Thank you.
Reply:I really liked the descriptiveness of this, I usually don't enjoy short-lined poems like this, but, this one I really loved! Its really rythmatic and moves along very well, bravo!
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